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Written as the opening scene of the 'Sharp To The Flat' musical (work in progress) an estate agent show a prospective buyer around the flat.


Lyric: Compete
Music: Backing track recorded, awaiting vocals

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'House of old wounds'                      by Martin Day

Let me show you round the flat as we chat. Here’s the kitchen,
And the bathroom. As I said, it’s two bed, separate loo.
But now the best, this lovely living room
With chimney breast and fireplace.

You can see that it’s ideal; it’s a steal, for your price range.
The location is a plus for the bus and the school.
I see from your face you love this living room.
The fireplace has caught your eye.

Now the owners live in Spain. There’s no chain. It’s all simple.
Make an offer if you please and these keys could be yours.

© M Day 29-Jan-2013
























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